Assignment Two – Corrections
I have made the following corrections as to my tutor’s
feedback.
Street scenes;
I completely agree with the tutor on the last image in
the is set, I had major difficulty with it and saw it in my minds eye a lot
differently. As I can’t go back to take the same image, I will say what I think
instead. I think if I had used spot metering, it would have worked better and
focused more in the street, also, I would have lead down on the floor (no
matter how dirty!) to get the shot that I wanted.
Back lit;
With
regards to the last images, they probably didn’t challenge me as much, so I
have decided to submit the following image;-I decided to take this image as it was extremely difficult to achieve, I wanted to show the detail of the cobweb, with the spider only particularly showing and tried to do so by drowning it out with the sun, it took a really long time for me to get the desired result as the sun (obviously) kept moving and I had to do a lot of highlight clipping, as much as I could without blacking out the cobweb.
I’m really pleased with this image, especially the
colours at the top of the actual web.
Reflective
scene;-
Seeing what my tutor suggested, I’m gutted that I didn’t
do what she suggested!. I have had a look at the images that I took, but to no
avail, maybe next time?!
Dappled light;-
On
reflection, I could have experimented a bit more with the dappled light scenes,
I’m pleased my tutor is as happy as am I with the spatula shot, however, I
understand where she is coming from, so, I have included this image, which I
believe gives a stronger contrast of light.Overall I am pleased with my feedback but it is clear I have a long way to go, I will continue to test myself, especially with the next assignment , which I’m really looking forward to.
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