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DPP-Assignment Four; Corrections

Assignment - Four – Corrections

The following are the corrections I have made in response to my tutors feedback and I have amended the final image accordingly;

My tutor thought that the writing wasn’t bold enough in the bottom section of the image, so I wrote the text again in white and wrote over the original, I tried it with the half writing (as above) and also with it fully written over in white and found that the writing worked better with half black and half white, as the white writing didn’t stand out as well on the red of the cocktail.

She also thought that the explosion wasn’t prominent enough, so I used my spatter brushes and picked the red colour from the strawberry to make more of an impact, the significance of the black shape was actually to show the background behind to make it look like an actual explosion, so it is not a shape as such, but more of a moulding of the back and foreground.

The purpose of the dripping of the strawberry was that the juices of the strawberry were leaking down the strawberry from the explosion.

The reason why I chose an explosion was to illustrate that there may be something bad in fruit and it’s not always necessarily good for you, so to explode the truth, as it were, or to say that there may be something bad inside as explosions are not always a good thing.

With regards to making a point about the fruit itself, it is exactly what it says at the bottom of the photo. I looked in to articles surrounding this and I wanted to pose a poignant question as people regard all fruit as good and the calorie content that is linked with it. I knew this would be intriguing and aimed at women who diet specifically. Here are some of the links I looked at with regards to this;-

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fruit

http://www.theguardian.com/lifeandstyle/2008/jan/23/foodanddrink.healthandwellbeing

http://www.fitsugar.com/Fruit-Bad-You-21878483

She also want me to reference a bit more to include specific details about each website and book used for this and every future assignment, which I have done below;-

Books used for this assignment;

Photo truth or Photo fiction?: Ethics and Media Imagery in the Digital Age by Thomas H. Wheeler (An interesting look in to manipulation through history and how it differs from today) – It talked about photos throughout history and how the process of “daguerreotype” started and how we have been able to manipulate the image in the present day, which relates to this assignment.

Portrait of a Young Girl by Mark Niemann-Ross (Rather than a book on direct fact, this is a fictional story of how Photoshopping and the ethics behind it effect the main character of the story, I used this to see if my perception on editing would be altered/influenced in a different way)-I think I have been specific enough with regards to this book.

Faking it: Manipulated Photography Before Photoshop (Metropolitan Museum of Art) by Mia Fineman (This is an interesting one, showing how many images were manipulated before Photoshop, in general and the Media, how they did it and the images that were used) – This book is linked directly to the exhibition in New York, it talks about the photographs in the early days, with technical notes in the back and throughout teamed with the images and how they were produced.

Websites used for this assignment;

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/photoshop - (To find definition)

http://nocroppingzone.blogspot.co.uk/2007/11/ansel-adams-excuse.html - (An interesting view on manipulation) - This was to look at someone else’s view on manipulation with regards to my photographic hero!, Ansel Adams.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Photo_manipulation - (To gain more factual information and images on manipulation) – I used this to look at images throughout history, the main uses for manipulation and the ethical ramifications when manipulated images are used tin photo journalism.

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Books Used

Faking it: Manipulated Photography Before Photoshop
Portrait of a Young Girl by Mark Niemann-Ross
Photo truth or Photo fiction?: Ethics and Media Imagery in the Digital Age by Thomas H. Wheeler
The Art of Black and White Photography: Techniques for Creating for Creating Superb Images in a Digital Workflow by Torsten Andreas Hoffmann
Black + White Photography: all about modern monochrome by Elizabeth (ed) Roberts
Edward Weston (Photo Book Series) Terence Pitts
Ansel Adams at 100 by John Szarkowski
Understanding Exposure by Bryan Peterson
The Photographer’s Eye; Composition and Design for better Digital Photos by Michael Freeman
Mastering Digital Photography by Michael Freeman
The Digital Photography Workflow Handbook by; Juergen Gulbins and Uwe Steinmuller
The Elements Of Photography: Angela Faris Belt
Mastering Canon EOS Flash Photography: NK Guy
Light, Science & Magic: Fil Hunter, Steve Biver, Paul Fungua
The Photograph As Contemporary Art: Charlotte Cotton

Copyright

All images are owned by me, Miriam Perritt, any person/s who use my work without my authorization will face legal action.

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The current act is the Copyright, Designs and Patents Act 1988.Rights coveredThe law gives the creators of literary, dramatic, musical, artistic works, sound recordings, broadcasts, films and typographical arrangement of published editions, rights to control the ways in which their material may be used.The rights cover; broadcast and public performance, copying, adapting, issuing, renting and lending copies to the public.In many cases, the creator will also have the right to be identified as the author and to object to distortions of his work.International conventions give protection in most countries, subject to national laws.Types of work protectedLiterary song lyrics, manuscripts, manuals, computer programs, commercial documents, leaflets, newsletters & articles etc.Dramatic plays, dance, etc.Musical recordings and score.Artistic photography, painting, sculptures, architecture, technical drawings/diagrams, maps, logos.Typographical arrangement of published editionsmagazines, periodicals, etc.Sound recordingmay be recordings of other copyright works, e.g. musical and literary.Film video footage, films, broadcasts and cable programmes.The Copyright (Computer Programs) Regulations 1992 extended the rules covering literary works to include computer programs.When rights occurCopyright is an automatic right and arises whenever an individual or company creates a work. 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DPP-Assignment Four; Corrections

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