Assignment Three – Corrections
The following are the corrections I have made in response
to my tutors feedback.
Image Two;
I completely
agree with my tutor saying that there needs to be more sky at the top of the
image to hold the eye, this is the image I was trying to achieve, as I didn’t
have my wide angle and the objectivity of the assignment was to create an image
that did not need much editing, so I couldn’t do a stitch shot, however, I did
take some different view points and here is the one that best fits the tutors
expectations.
Image Three;
My
tutor would have preferred this image to be cropped in to a square, I tried to
do it, however, when I cropped it to a square, it didn’t quite work, the image
lost its lustre and depth. I had, again, taken a photograph with a different
view point, which I believe works a lot better.
Image Four;
I just needed to re adjust the image by rotation it, to stop
the buildings looking like they leaned in towards the river, I found it difficult
to do, due to trying to keep the bridge curved. This is the final result and I
feel that I managed to do it in the end.
Image Five;
As
with Image Two, the suggestion was to crop it to square, but again, I have got
another shot of the bridge, it’s not as sharp as the other image, but I believe
this image works better as a long vertical shot and the bottom of the image
works better in this one.
Image Six;
The
suggestion was to have a closer shot to see that padlocks are involved, this is
an image that I took, in which have a close up shot of the padlocks.
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